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Forte


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44 comentários:

Camilinha disse...

Teu azul espinhento é lindo... reinvente-se sempre!!!



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Uau!
Você tá ótimo, Jorge!

Gostei principalmente dessa parte:
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Como a morte
Forte
Maior que qualquer corte.'

Maior que qualquer corte.

Demais!

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Salve simpatia!

Gostei dessa concatenação...

"Impura pira
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Tem ritmo!

B.E.I.J.O.S

• c. disse...

a semiótica da beleza
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Mah disse...

a brasa das paixões se incendeia com poesia de primeira...

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ai ai... E quem diz que este rei vem e meu deixa em paz?
Com frases belas, coloca a minha rubra cor em contraste profundo... Como se profundas já não fossem suas palavras bonitas.

Beijos poeta do caos brando

;)

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Em tom de melodia.
Afinado do grave ao agudo.

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Olhos de caos. Gostei disso.

E vc escreveu para quem aqui te escreve sem ao menos saber.

Meu preferido, fato.

Nathália E. disse...

Adorei a 2ª imagem!

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Aline Ribeiro disse...

Com certeza a moça mereceu!

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Arrasa!

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Meus poetas mortos que me perdoem...
Quero mais é beber poesia de poeta vivo toda na dançacinha em cima de um cogumelo...isso sim!!!

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Adoro vermelho!
Adoro azul!
Gostei demais da poesia e das nuances q me ela me fez recodar.
Grande beijo

Ps. Salve ao destino que nos fez encontrar novamente. Amei! Como sempre, os versos seus!
Beijo

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Jorge, conheço bem seus poemas deixados em comentários em outros blogs, e os aprecio pela qualidade e fluidez.
Esse em particular parece que nasceu do fim, olho por olho...
Por isso é agradeço-lhe ao comentário poético surreal deixado na face.

abraços.

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Olá poeta!

A minha aura fora tragada pela tua poesia. Essa inversão de matizes me fascina. Vc escreve loucamente... Amei.


Ana.

•.¸¸.ஐJenny Shecter disse...

Lá no azul do horizonte,
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Querido Jorge.

Estou aqui novamente para dizer que me apaixonei por sua arte e que estou disposta a vir aqui para sempre, e assim embeber-me de sua expressão delicada, furta-cor, texturizada e, acima de tudo, belíssima.

Não sei te dizer, mas encontrei vc, assim como se acha uma pérola rara no fundo do mar - uma Atlântida Perdida? -, ou até mesmo um diamante encravado na rocha, ou uma estrela-diamante no céu.

Amigo, não diz nada. Apenas aceite o meu abraço.

Deixei uma resposta ao teu comentário lá no meu blog. Sempre respondo aos comentários dos amigos - é um costume que estabeleci por lá.


Beijos intergaláticos,

Ana.

Ale Danyluk disse...

Bravo Jorge !!!!
Emudeci...
Por vezes me faz lembrar o qto é bom te ler... ( e não ler-te)
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